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peter radiator
= Cult of Ray =
USA
653 Posts |
 Posted - 09/18/2017 : 08:15:58
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In the interest of spurring discussion and usage of these boards, I encourage folks to compose traditional (5/7/5) haikus related directly or indirectly to FBF and/or his works.
If anyone is up for this, please post your efforts in this thread.
I have yet to attempt any myself, but will add mine when complete.
Ready?
Go.
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"Real music is out there and real people are making it." ~ Webb Wilder |
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pot
> Teenager of the Year <
Iceland
3910 Posts |
Posted - 09/18/2017 : 09:58:10
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H'llo my name is pot
I have been a member here
for about ten years |
Edited by - pot on 09/18/2017 12:12:12 |
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hammerhands
* Dog in the Sand *
Canada
1594 Posts |
Posted - 09/18/2017 : 11:20:03
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5/7/5?
I will try. |
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peter radiator
= Cult of Ray =
USA
653 Posts |
Posted - 09/18/2017 : 11:38:07
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Remember, a traditional haiku is three lines, with the first line 5, the second line 7 and the third line 5.
That's syllables, not words.
Rhyming is not a requirement in any way...
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"Real music is out there and real people are making it." ~ Webb Wilder |
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pot
> Teenager of the Year <
Iceland
3910 Posts |
Posted - 09/18/2017 : 12:12:24
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| Yes, you have to pronounce the "Hello" in my haiku as a one syllable word, like "H'llo.." |
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peter radiator
= Cult of Ray =
USA
653 Posts |
Posted - 09/18/2017 : 14:30:53
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quote:
Originally posted by pot
Yes, you have to pronounce the "Hello" in my haiku as a one syllable word, like "H'llo.."
:)
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"Real music is out there and real people are making it." ~ Webb Wilder |
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Bedbug
> Teenager of the Year <
3151 Posts |
Posted - 09/18/2017 : 16:43:28
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River Euphrates
I can't make out the lyrics
River Euphrates |
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hammerhands
* Dog in the Sand *
Canada
1594 Posts |
Posted - 09/18/2017 : 23:55:38
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Here's what I have so far.
V1.
First, cover your ears
But then give your head a shake
Feel your glutes burning
V2.
First, clobber your ears
But then glib your head a shake
Feel your glutes burning
I can do better. |
Edited by - hammerhands on 09/21/2017 08:22:34 |
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pot
> Teenager of the Year <
Iceland
3910 Posts |
Posted - 09/19/2017 : 00:49:37
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I like the Pixies
The Breeders are also quite good
Charles T is da man!
Johnny Barleycorn
Track Three; Fast Man Raiderman
A song 'bout a dude |
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pot
> Teenager of the Year <
Iceland
3910 Posts |
Posted - 09/19/2017 : 02:35:24
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Charles, Kim, Joey and Dave
Formed a band in the Eighties
They called it the Pixies |
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McDutchie
= Cult of Ray =
United Kingdom
268 Posts |
Posted - 09/19/2017 : 03:34:04
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If Pixies are five
Then the Devil is seven
and God's demoted
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Bedbug
> Teenager of the Year <
3151 Posts |
Posted - 09/19/2017 : 03:54:05
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I've Seen Your Picture
It isn't about Wal-Mart
It's about Kim Deal |
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Sprite
* Dog in the Sand *
1335 Posts |
Posted - 09/19/2017 : 05:37:20
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Hey Charles, I'm hurting
Sure would love new music for
2017 |
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pot
> Teenager of the Year <
Iceland
3910 Posts |
Posted - 09/19/2017 : 09:01:21
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Once upon a time
Frank Black and The Catholics
Released a box set |
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Bedbug
> Teenager of the Year <
3151 Posts |
Posted - 09/19/2017 : 09:55:15
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The Frank Black Forum
It's where I write my Haikus
We live in a dream |
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pot
> Teenager of the Year <
Iceland
3910 Posts |
Posted - 09/19/2017 : 10:22:35
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Whistle, Whistle, ooh
La la me love you long time
Sucky and fucky |
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Bedbug
> Teenager of the Year <
3151 Posts |
Posted - 09/19/2017 : 10:57:07
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My girlfriend told me
"You put the cock in cocktail."
Her name is Frank Black |
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darwin
>> Denizen of the Citizens Band <<
USA
5454 Posts |
Posted - 09/19/2017 : 15:28:47
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Facebook and Twitter
Back and forth banter not seen
This is not progress |
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darwin
>> Denizen of the Citizens Band <<
USA
5454 Posts |
Posted - 09/19/2017 : 15:32:03
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Ok something less precious
Frank made little dough
The Catholics live and tight
Babies need to eat |
Edited by - darwin on 09/19/2017 15:33:35 |
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danjersey
> Teenager of the Year <
USA
2792 Posts |
Posted - 09/19/2017 : 17:27:02
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after all he made
memory serves us to count
on seven fingers
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Bedbug
> Teenager of the Year <
3151 Posts |
Posted - 09/19/2017 : 18:05:01
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Does anyone have
All of their Pixies cassettes
From back in the day? |
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picpic
* Dog in the Sand *
Belgium
1874 Posts |
Posted - 09/19/2017 : 22:15:18
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They had good music
But it seems like the sound guy
Put his stamp on it
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"Service Unavailable" |
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Bedbug
> Teenager of the Year <
3151 Posts |
Posted - 09/19/2017 : 23:44:53
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Charles grew up in church
The preacher influenced him
He's like Joel Osteen |
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pot
> Teenager of the Year <
Iceland
3910 Posts |
Posted - 09/20/2017 : 00:28:02
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Nonstoperotik
The Last solo Frank Black album
Two more Pixies' since then |
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pot
> Teenager of the Year <
Iceland
3910 Posts |
Posted - 09/20/2017 : 01:42:01
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Wayout in the water
The underwater god of rock
Emerges and exhales |
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Sprite
* Dog in the Sand *
1335 Posts |
Posted - 09/20/2017 : 01:44:18
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I said to Frank Black
What will wake this forum up
And he said, HAIKUS! |
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Bedbug
> Teenager of the Year <
3151 Posts |
Posted - 09/20/2017 : 07:30:08
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Lee Hazelwood rules
Subbacultcha is about
Him and Nancy S |
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pot
> Teenager of the Year <
Iceland
3910 Posts |
Posted - 09/20/2017 : 08:25:31
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Can someone tell me
How to pronounce "haikus" please?
Otherwise I'll googl'it |
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pot
> Teenager of the Year <
Iceland
3910 Posts |
Posted - 09/20/2017 : 08:27:35
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Japanese poetry
The opposite of Irish
Who do Limericks |
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Bedbug
> Teenager of the Year <
3151 Posts |
Posted - 09/21/2017 : 02:08:43
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Thank you Peter R
For the Haiku suggestion
Wasting time is _______ |
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pot
> Teenager of the Year <
Iceland
3910 Posts |
Posted - 09/21/2017 : 02:21:34
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Blankety blank
Blankety blank, ding ding
Blankety blank..
(soz had to drop a syllable on each line there, but it still works) |
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pot
> Teenager of the Year <
Iceland
3910 Posts |
Posted - 09/21/2017 : 02:36:35
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I was talking to
Peachy Peach about Frank Black
She gave me a BJ |
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pmjk
- FB Fan -
Ireland
92 Posts |
Posted - 09/21/2017 : 05:44:18
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they're going higher
wind is whistling on the barbs
your head's a hammer
-Black Francis
Kingi you wanker
You asshole, I hate you heaps
Please die soon, in pain
–Ricky Baker |
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peter radiator
= Cult of Ray =
USA
653 Posts |
Posted - 09/21/2017 : 07:31:19
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Praying faster I
Anticipate new
Directions in sound and light
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"Real music is out there and real people are making it." ~ Webb Wilder |
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pot
> Teenager of the Year <
Iceland
3910 Posts |
Posted - 09/21/2017 : 09:05:12
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When the levee breaks
Everybody's gonna drown
We'll all become sea urchins |
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peter radiator
= Cult of Ray =
USA
653 Posts |
Posted - 09/21/2017 : 11:22:14
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Jagged flannel holes
Stubbled pate, neck and jawline
Piercing, weary eyes
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"Real music is out there and real people are making it." ~ Webb Wilder |
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