if your playing's as crappy as your ear, i say you did good
i play it similar but with a few added notes
----------------|---10-9-----------------
----------------|--------10--------------
--2/7-9-7-9b----|-----------11/16\14-----
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--2/7-9-7-b9h-|--2/7-9-7-9b-7---
--------------|-----------------
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--------------|-----------------
----10-9h-------------
-----------10/12\10---
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and the last chord (G#add3,+5) i think is an A played like this:
---0---
---0---
---6---
---7---
---7---
---5---